9/20/12

I am going to use parts of the SOC that I wrote on Thursday to write a possible scene for my screenplay.

As I said, these are the parts that stuck out to me:

- nothing is funny so i dont know why im laughing
-Im actually frustrated and happy at the same time
-People are stupid. Like really stupid. I hate people. Why do that have to be so annoying.
-You know those people who can just breathe and it'll piss you off? There are a few of those in my life. What about the people who you can't hate no matter how much you want to? I hate that even more.
-Woah, im such a pessimist. Hate, hate, hate, hate. What about love? I love my family, I love my friends, my dog is pretty cool, I love my dog.

From these phrases, this is what I have come up with for a possible part of a scene:

Dani pacing back and fourth in the hallway alone. Austin runs out of the cafeteria. He walks over to Dani, who is clearly at war with herself at the moment. He sits on a bench infront of where she is. There is a long pause before someone speaks up

Austin: So... How's it goin?
Dani: I'm actually frustrated and happy at the same time.
Austin: You should be happy. You finally stood up for yourself.
Dani: I guess.
Austin: You guess what?
Dani: I don't know, I feel like I was a little harsh.
Austin: That's why you shouldn't keep things so bottled up inside like you do. Cause then that happens.
Dani: I guess.
Austin: That was pretty badass though.
Dani: I can't help it! She's one of those people who could breathe and it would piss me off. 




Reflection:
 I think that I deserve a 100 for this blog post. Although it may not seem like it, I spent a lot of time trying to piece a part of a scene together using a part of my SOC. It will definatly need to become stronger, and I will eventually need to add more length to it, but I am happy with what I have written today.