Today, I decided to added one last scene to the end. Here I go again, adding to random parts of the screenplay. This part is not final, this is just me messing with an idea.
Austin has just passed out from drinking too much.
The screen is black, Dani's laugh is the only thing that is heard. She is talking, but you cannot make out the words. Slowly, you are able to make out words, and the phrase that is being repeated
VOICE: Wake up Austin.
It is repeated.
A hospital room has now come into focus. Austin is laying in bed. His mother is by his side, holding his hand. She is also sobbing.
MRS. KRATNER: Wake up Austin. Honey wake up.
CUT.
Reflection: I think I deserve a 100 for today. I know the quantity of my work today isn't so great, but I spent a lot of time thing about a possible way I wanted the last moments to go. I want a cliffhanger. It is something I have wanted to end with since I started writing the screenplay, but I don't want it to be cheesy. I feel like this is.
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